Not bad at all for a second round, if you don't feel like working more on it just keep it in the bottom of drawer and forget about it for about a year while you do other carvings.
Then once the year has passed go and get it, put it side by side with the last one you've made. You'll be amazed to see how much you've improved and most problably you'll want to work a bit more on it, or keep it as record.
The best advice a master carver gave me many years ago was this:
"The art of a good barber is to get sideburns out of a place where there is no hair D.H."
And I must say that once you understand it, things become easier.